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What's the meaning to writing about Death, is it because I'm a Dead Poet ? In the dying world of (YAP Poetry) ?
04-08-2014, 08:53 PM
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What's the meaning to writing about Death, is it because I'm a Dead Poet ? In the dying world of (YAP Poetry) ?
Tune up the volume
and you'll hear the grass grow
Listen... Listen ..
can you hear the sound of
''Quiet, ! ...'Emptiness ?
tune the frequency down
can you hear my heart
beeping underground ?
I'm in this
vegetable patch
with the moving plants
In fine red earth,
The carrots are growing fast.
And
it's kinda warm with the worms .
So I will not die alone or hungry .

I
shall guard this cocoon
so come climb into
my casket
case ,
lest the moonlight madden take us

to eternal dust .


Smile

Going underground

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04-08-2014, 08:54 PM
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it means that simply, your question, as well as my answer, will die in - give it a couple of hours. And you're right, Yahoo poetry is a dying world. That's why i'm now with Facebook - and there are a lot of friendly poetry sites there. Leave this tyrannical place - you deserve better.

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04-08-2014, 09:01 PM
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A poem more for exquisite imagery/ impressions
than to waste slamming the idiocies..
this is
so much a work of verbal art, that I`m in awe(eyes popping, heart & mind want more).
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04-08-2014, 09:09 PM
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Carrots and cadavers---a brilliant combination. The carrots are so alive with promise that it's a little infectious.
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