Correct this paragraph please!!!!?

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1.Pepsi's Diet Pepsi commercial features Sofia Vergara, a Colombian actress, and David Beckam , a British soccer star, to sell their product. At the beginning of commercial, Sofia Verger is seen laying on a beach chair, fanning herself from the heat. Thirst for liquid, she looked around and saw a young lady drinking a can of ice cold diet Pepsi. She is eager for one, but the line at the vendor is abnormally long. Using her handy tool of Twitter, she tweets a lie; “At the pier...just saw David Beckham!(Beach Tweet).” Surprisingly, everyone on the scene gets the tweet and rush to the pier in the hopes of seeing Beckham. With everyone gone, she went for a can of refreshing diet Pepsi. Refreshed, Beckham walks over to pick up his soccer ball and asks her “What's going on over there?” Pepsi targeted young females as the main audience of this commercial. Nearly all casting are females in their 20's, healthy, fit, and sexy. Pepsi cleverly used all three appeals: ethos, logos, and pathos.
2.When one is asked to think about a soft drink, most often the Pepsi brand comes to mind. Pepsi is a very prominent leader in the soda market. “Ranking as the 43rd largest company on Fortune 500 and the largest beverage company in the world(Pepsi History)” is impress enough to attract consumers. Diet Pepsi is a trademarked product of PepsiCo, Inc that has “stood the test of time since 1898(Pepsi History).” The fame of David Beckham and Sofia Vergara bring a sense of reliability to product. Fans adore products their idol promote and most often will buy to test one out. The scene from commercial provide evidence; after Sofia tweet that she saw Beckham at the pier, everyone rush over without questioning. Pepsi want their audience to see it as a trustworthy, reliable, trendy, and an exciting all-round company.

Help me correct the second paragraph for the diet pepsi commerical "Beach Tweet: Diet Pepsi Commercial Starring Sofia Vergara and David Beckham"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?NR=1&v=FEFI-_Sg5G0

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Pepsi's Diet Pepsi commercial features both Sofia Vergara, a Colombian actress and David Beckham, a British soccer star. At the beginning of commercial, Sofia Vergara is seen laying on a beach chair, fanning herself from the heat. Thirsty, she looked around and saw a young lady drinking a can of ice cold Diet Pepsi. She is eager for a can herself, but the line at the vendor is abnormally long. Using her handy tool of Twitter, she tweets a lie; “At the pier...just saw David Beckham!(Beach Tweet).” Surprisingly, everyone on the scene gets the tweet and rushes to the pier in the hopes of seeing Beckham. With everyone gone, she went for a can of refreshing Diet Pepsi. Refreshed, Beckham walks over to pick up his soccer ball and asks her “What's going on over there?” Pepsi targeted young females as the main audience for this commercial. Nearly all of the cast are in their 20's; healthy, fit, and sexy. Pepsi cleverly used all three appeals: ethos, logos, and pathos.

2.When one is asked to think of a soft drink, more often than not the Pepsi franchise comes to mind. Pepsi is a prominent leader in the beverage market. “Ranking as the 43rd largest company on Fortune 500 and the largest beverage company in the world(Pepsi History)” is impressive enough to attract consumers. Diet Pepsi is a trademarked product of PepsiCo, Inc that has “stood the test of time since 1898(Pepsi History).” The fame of David Beckham and Sofia Vergara bring a sense of reliability to product. Fans adore products their idols promote and will often buy that product to test it out. The scene from the commercial provides evidence of this; after Sofia tweets that she saw Beckham at the pier, everyone rushes over immediately. Pepsi wants their audience to see it as a trustworthy, reliable, trendy, and all-round exciting company.