What do you think about my website?

[Jack]

I have just recently made a website called DreamHawk, it's a competition website and offers good prizes. I want it to be big so if you guys have any tips or tell me what looks wrong on the website, anything would be useful.

http://www.dreamhawk.org/

Thanks in advance.

[Margaret S]

A bit too much of a mish mash for me sorry. Colours don't work well together. Everything says 'oops' not responding!
Too many different fonts, not enough explanation of what is involved, gmail for the email contact, dreamhawk the name is a big site on .com so that is an issue too (my laptop kept taking me to it not you - even with org in the addy)
If I were you I'd try a different design, more information, less bits (loading is taking ages only to come up in the end with the 'oops' message).
I am afraid for me anyway this sort of site just shouts out scam but that may just be me...
Good luck I hope you can get it sorted.

[Jameo]

It's not obvious what dream hawk does and how.