Do you think my story is okay?

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I have a story I made up called To Be With You.. Basically it's about a virtual romance. Kenia, the main character, is in 'love' with a pop star celebrity. She's a huge fan of him.. And well there's more to the story but I'mma just say the basics of it. She gets a follow from him on twitter, later she dm's him.. hopefully he'll answer back.. and he does.. they become good friends and all. They talk about their lives and Kenia finds out more about him that she never knew.. soon secrets are shared, sparks fly, and erotic tensions simmers. Even though he has a girlfriend, he feels that he has to meet her badly... it's like a distance relationship... My story isn't done though... So is it okay?

[Taylor]

Sounds good

[Brain Freeze]

I read a story like that. It can be a lot of fun.

In the story I read the girl had been raped and could never leave her house because she was too traumatized so she would chat to people online. Then she meets a guy on the website. So the guy was basically her way of gaining courage to get out of the house. She also had a whole lot of issues with her family, etc. Then eventually they meet. It was a very sweet story about internet dating