Help me with my Press Release please :)?

[Emil @ CliqueOut]

Hi guys,
i'm working on my website's press release and would love your input - it's my first



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FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE: April 2014



CliqueOut!
by The Psychologie Playhouse
Singapore
hello@cliqueout.com
http://www.Cliqueout.com


CliqueOut – Get out and join a group.
Making connections in groups, no commitment, no membership.


Singapore: The Psychologie Playhouse jumps into social media and network with the launch of a website based on spontaneous group outings and both casual and official group events.
CliqueOut.com allows registered users to open invites to other users without the need for membership to any groups, clubs, societies or organizations. CliqueOut is available in major cities around the world.

Non-virtual social skills must not be forgotten and, “CliqueOut comes at a time where people need to create real-life human interactions, minus the full-on commitment that other platforms require and without that awkwardness that comes with a one to one person meet”, said CliqueOut founder, Emil Antoan.

CliqueOut invites anyone who are 16 years old and above to widen their social circles by sharing activities and experiences in numbers, with benefits including;
•Enhanced social skills and confidence in a group setting
•Safety in numbers when individuals meet in groups
•Opportunities for anyone to quickly get social through preferred activities but without full-time commitment or official registration to become members

People from all walks of life, situations or background would benefit with CliqueOut. You could be a group of music geeks, or a business traveler looking for last minute drinking buddies, maybe even a new neighbor looking to meet locals; there would be social opportunities to meet your needs and wants. In addition; the CliqueOut simple group chat connects users instantly. It all begins at CliqueOut.com.

The Psychologie Playhouse (TPP) is an educational, social and event service provider based in Singapore. Founded by Emil Antoan in 2006, TPP has branched and expanded its projects online to meet the social needs on the internet whilst retaining the importance of live educational and social events. CliqueOut is its first social network, and has received great reviews.



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What are your thoughts/ideas/suggestions?
All appreciated!
Thank you in advance!

[Amal]

Readers would like to know the antecedents of the entrepreneur. Your professional background with basic qualifications needs to be introduced to the readers.

[robert m]

Keep it short. Make it "newsy". Attach photos with the PR. Make sure you do the basics like add your contact details, embargo date etc.