last paraphrasing help please - 10 points?

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how do i paraphrase this -

aleandra hiam 2009 discussed that if you are targeting at a young audience a cool social networking site such as facebook, bebo, myspace or twitter can be the core of your web marketing strategy? xxx

[Dr. Charles Atlas]

to target a young audience, aleandra hiam suggests using a social networking site (such as facebook or myspace) as the base of your webmarketing.