Could anyone correct my sentence?

[kentocosan]

This must be a huge step forward in my illustration career. And it's first time for me to provide my illustrations with a company website where I don't have to pay attention to any copy right issue which would always happen if I posted my works which have already been published in other media on Facebook.So it could be good promotion for my business.
Thanks to those who involved with this project and my distinct friends and family who always support me. Anyway please have a look!

[john wondering]

This is definitely a huge step forward in my illustration career. It's the first time I'm showing my illustrations on a company website where I don't have to pay attention to any copyright issues, which used to occur if I posted my already published works on Facebook.
This is likely to be a positive promotion for my business. 
Thanks to all those who are involved with this project and to my friends and family who always support me.
Anyway please have a look!


I hope this helps.
Good luck and best wishes.