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Is the following short English letter correct and polite?
11-09-2012, 09:46 AM
Post: #1
Is the following short English letter correct and polite?
Hello everybody,

I am studying English course in a classroom that is fully with international students. There is an idea came to my mind which mainly consists of two parts:
First part: about creating Facebook group to chat, share useful stuff and know each other more.
Second part: about meeting somewhere once or twice in a week to have a conversation class.

I want to write a short paragraph about each part in a piece of paper and pass it around in the class to write their names under each part that they would to get involved with.
So could you please help me in reviewing and modifying it (if required) ?

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LETTER:


Please write your name down if you are interested in any one of the following two parts:

First part: about creating Facebook group to chat, share useful stuff and know each other more. Since we are from different countries, ages, background and we are studying together, it is a good idea to gather in a place where we can know each other more and be in touch after the course.
What do you think? If you agree or you are interested, please write your name down


Second part: all of us are coming here to learn English, and we all want to improve all of our skills like speaking. To speak in English, you need a partner, so let us meet somewhere once or twice in a week (in one of the following times mentioned below) for one hour or more as we will agree later on to have a conversation class to talk about ourselves and discuss any topic.
What do you think? If you agree or you are interested, please write your name down

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11-09-2012, 09:54 AM
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Edited:

Please write your name if you are interested in any one of the following two parts:

First part: Creating a Facebook group to chat, share useful stuff and know more about each other. Since we are from different countries, of different ages and background and we are studying together, it is a good idea to gather in a place where we can get to know each other and keep in touch after the course.
What do you think? If you agree or you are interested, please write your name.


Second part: All of us are coming here to learn English and we want to improve all of our skills such as speaking. To practice speaking in English, you need a partner. So let us meet somewhere once or twice in a week (in one of the following times mentioned below) for an hour or more as we will agree later on to have a conversation to talk about ourselves and discuss any topic.
What do you think? If you agree or you are interested, please write your name.

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