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(10points) is this sentence correct for facebook status?
11-09-2012, 10:19 AM
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(10points) is this sentence correct for facebook status?
Is this sentence correct: ' hi.im gonna deactivate my facebook profile due to timeline. Miss u friends'
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11-09-2012, 10:28 AM
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Correct.
try "because of " instead of "due to"
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11-09-2012, 10:28 AM
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Try something like this.. " Hey guys, i'm de-activating my Facebook account because I don't like the new "Timeline" Feature. I'm going to miss all of you dearly, and I hope that we can stay in touch."
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