my story...please read? http://apps.facebook.com/bathroomwall/entry/1720043?

[☮hello :-)]

I'm writing a story and I have some posted so far and I'll post more once I know that anyone is reading...http://apps.facebook.com/bathroomwall/entry/1720043
I want to know if it's good, I have a lot written just not typed yet :/

PLEASE READ!


THANKS, ILY GUYSSS! <3
http://apps.facebook.com/bathroomwall/entry/1720043

[Shriekingpatch897]

I'm not going to read it, mainly because you posted the link all over the question. So no thanks.

[Tony1234]

Um its okay, but as I guy I would never read this, I think this is mostly interesting for women.

[princesslulu121802]

It's a good start. What is the basis for the story? Like do you know where you want to go with it? I know this sounds like a lot of work but every good writer already knows how the story will end before they start the first line.

[justme]

You should post it on Yahoo because I REALLY wanna read it!!!