Was I being a jerk towards this girl on Facebook?

[ELO Kiddies]

Today I was looking at my friends' Facebook wall and seen a woman in her mid 30s posting on my friends' wall and I wanted to meet her and build a friendship with her and asked her to be on my friends list, she accepted and soon afterwards I've immediately posted her a message and this was the message I've posted to her "

I see you're friends with Anna and Stephanie, they're both really nice girls and are a lot of fun to be around, I have a question I wanna ask you, do you know a guy named Ramon He went to Wa-Hi and graduated in 1995, he's a big Hispanic guy with glasses and has a high pitched speaking voice, he has a really big heart of gold and always is willing to go the extra mile to be a great friend for everyone and has a lot of love and compassion for his fellow men, sadly people tend to overlook his kindness in favor of his learning disability and seemed annoyed with the love and compassion he has to offer and his child like personality."

[Music Man]

not really, you just wanted to meet her and to get to know her, I did think you went a little too far expressing your happiness over Ramon's kindness though

[Rob]

No, you just wanted to ask her a question about Ramon. But it sounded like you wanted to set her up with Ramon. Just don't overdo it with the whole Ramon situation.

[i am dog]

doesn't sound jerky, just needy. girls don't like needy. they like to be the needy ones. usually.