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[Abigail]

                                    How Does Twitter Works.

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          What is twitter and how does it work? Twitter is one of the simplest social 

networking websites in the world, that allows you to connect with other people who

Share your interests or who might be interested in what you have to say. However, 

Many people have a tough time figuring out how it actually works. Unlike any other

Websites, twitter is a micro-blogging websites which allows you to post your views 

And opinions In only 140 characters long. Even the 'About Me' section of your 

Twitter account has a character limit of 160 characters, which means you can just 

write a line or two about yourself. 

        Twitter is free to join and you can set up

An account in a matter of just a few minutes. After you creat an account  on 

twitter, you make a username, that becomes part of your Twitter profile URL (for 

example, @marthastewart's Twitter profile can be found at 

http://twitter.com/marthastewart). Your Twitter profile URL links directly to your 

profile page and is the easiest and quickest way for others to find you. After your 

page is set up, your ready to start tweeting and following people who you find 

interesting. You can follow people such as your friends/ 

favorite celebrity/ or people you've met on the Internet.  It's important to 

understand when you follow someone on twitter, any updates that this person posts 

will appear on your twitter feed, You can also retweet the tweets you like by clicking 

on the RT tab below them. 

            Tweeting regularly and adding a hint of humor to your tweets are some 

simple methods which can help you get more followers on Twitter. Twitter gives you 
 
current topics (which are shown as trends on your homepage) using the hash tag 

(#topic) will also help you reach out to the people and get new followers. 

              You can message someone or reply to someone's tweet by using the 'at sign' (@reply). 

However, you need to take into consideration the fact that if you message someone 

using this feature, that person's followers will also get to see your tweet. If you are 

not keen on sharing your message in the public domain, you can send him/her a Direct 

Message (DM) which only he/she will be able to read. Hopefully this gives you a little 

bit of insight as to how Twitter works and what the benefits are of having a Twitter 

account.

[Julia]

What is twitter and how does it work? Twitter is one of the simplest social

networking websites in the world. It allows you to connect with other people who

share your interests or who might be interested in what you have to say. However,

many people have a tough time figuring out how it actually works. Unlike any other

websites, twitter is a micro-blogging website which allows you to post your views

and opinions in only 140 characters. Even the 'About Me' section of your

Twitter account has a character limit of 160 characters, which means you can only

write a line or two about yourself.

Twitter is free to join and you can set up an account in a matter of just a few minutes. After you create an account on twitter, you make a username that becomes part of your Twitter profile URL (for

example, @marthastewart's Twitter profile can be found at http://twitter.com/marthastewart). Your Twitter profile URL links directly to your profile page and is the easiest and quickest way for others to find you. After your page is set up, you're ready to start tweeting and following people who you find

interesting. You can follow people such as your friends, favorite celebrities, orpeople you've met on the Internet. It's important to understand when you follow someone on twitter, any updates that this person posts will appear on your twitter feed, You can also retweet the tweets you like by clicking

on the RT tab below them.

Tweeting regularly and adding a hint of humor to your tweets are some simple methods which can help you get more followers on Twitter. Twitter gives you current topics (which are shown as trends on your homepage) using the hash tag (#topic) will also help you reach out to the people and get new followers.

You can message someone or reply to someone's tweet by using the 'at sign' (@reply). However, you need to take into consideration the fact that if you message someone using this feature, that person's followers will also get to see your tweet. If you are not keen on sharing your message in the public domain, you can send him/her a direct message (DM) which only he/she will be able to read. Hopefully this gives you a little bit of insight as to how Twitter works and what the benefits are of having a Twitter account.

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Not a lot of corrections as this was a small essay. Just note that sometimes you capitalize words that do not need to be capitalized.