Critical Thinking Journal Writing?

[Sakura]

Social networking sites such as Facebook, Friendster and Twitter are very popular among people throughout the world. Although it is a useful platform to keep in touch with friends, other issues such as invsion of privacy and addiction to the sites arise.

Do you think that social networking sites have brought have brought more benfit than harn to society? Give reasons to support your opinion.

I just want some points since my journal writing is rejected by teacher.

[Susan]

Rejected by your teacher? Did you ask him what's wrong with your writing?

Benefits of social networking:
- stay in touch with family, friends, etc.
- get to know new people
- enhance your networking (possibility to find jobs, exchange information, etc.)

Cons of social networking:
- too much information visible to outsiders
- easy targeting for pedophiles, etc.

If i was you, i would ask him what he finds wrong with it