Why have i been rejected and how do i make girls think im not a player?

[Moe]

I was a shy guy. Now i freely talk to girls. There is this one girl in my english class whom i had a crush on , i manned up and asked her for her contact info only to find out she was taken AFTER getting her facebook. I offered friendship but she didint even respind to that. Second, i walk up to girls and try to start a convo and use some pick up lines and they just seem so rejecting. I am dressed well. Why is this? Did i hit on the wrong girls or am i doing something wrong? Only about 2 gave me thier numbers but they looked like sluts so i didint bother. All the girls whom i thought were girlfriend material reject me.

Also, as i mentioned i was a shy guy but now i talk to girls more openly. How do i make them think
Im not like other guys who just hit on random girls to get to bed? Because in reality i dont want that and i really want a girl to love and have a commited relationship with.

[nemesis2g3]

Your "pick up lines" are probably killing your game. Are you in high school or college? If HS, you're probably being viewed as too nice, or too much of a goody goody. You're ahead of your time. Often girls that age go for mystery and appeal. And as far as clothing...you want to look mall fresh not math club.
If you're in college you're just going for the wrong women. You are where you should be for that age bracket, but if you're not a frat or a jock you have to work a little harder. Join a study group. That will help you in the conversation dept. Good luck!