Is this message ok to send to someone on blackberry messenger?

[Orange]

hey ' your probably wondering who the hell am i, but you seem like a nice person, do you want to talk? or should i delete you if you think its too creepy =D

He doesn't know who I am, but I've seen him around & I follow him on twitter. He put his blackberry pin on twitter and this morning I told him that I got his pin of twitter and I think he's cute he said "Ohh.. Thanks "

Is that message ok to send to him, if not what would be better?

[AuntKatie]

I think it would be a bit creepy. talk to him in real life.