What do you think of this rap?

[Loose Q]

I'm new to this yahoo rap section and I just wanted feedback,thanks in advance


Like water I let the dope drops drip out
No doubt,I'm finna po out these flows to let a n*gga sprout
Music be the picture like Photos SYNTHESIZED
Get it?no lies,probably gonna let it pass you,I ain't surprised....
You need to Open up ya 3rd eye with this Mary Jane
Cause these slaves to the vain,don't take this sh*t to the brain
cant ya see this sh*t as a pot of gold,that set to be sold
I ain't talking weed,instead ya just wanna fold what's bout to unfold
And I'm just Tryna hit that ignorance and reach that bliss
But the main cause of MI-STRESS be that mistress
Damn,but I'm just hovering on that 4 leaf clover
Aka cannabis still can't get it,could I be the next young hova
And drop a project and get more then a mili dollars
It's probable,cause rhymes got that copy and paste value
They like what's down with ya crew
,I turn round and say I don't know but the tape still due
So he Loose Q who,finna light this place up like a kilo/killer....joule/Jewel

[mozforthewin]

this $hit was good! the rhymes were good...but homie listen up! what do u wanted to tell?? y do these niggas make rap witout any f#ckin topic! i can help u wit that...i am a g rapper
contact me on twitter _moz_xii !