Does my resume look good to you?

[Hoo]

In short, I'm graduating next semester and I'm trying to get an internship with a couple government agencies. Please look at my resume and tell me if it needs anything more before I send it in. I don't have much work experience but I'm on my 5th yr of school and because of my GPA qualify for a GS7

OBJECTIVE
________________________________________Graduate, seeking employment and/or internship opportunity specializing in the field of human resources, channeling interpersonal and creative skills in order to meet organizational goals and professional development.

EDUCATION
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Towson University, Towson, MDGraduation Date: May 24, 2013
Bachelor of Science in Sociology
Completed credits: 121
Major GPA: 3.334
Cumulative GPA: 3.179

EXPERIENCE
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Luxottica—Sunglass Hut,-------, MDJune 2012 – Present
Lead Retail Sales Associate and Keyholder
•Accounting for retail sales of $20,466 in a part-time, 6 month period, personally exceeding goals by 46%
•Driving sales to closure by enthusiastically asking questions and making appropriate product recommendations
•Ensure store is stocked, displayed and secured according to plan. (Protecting company assets)
•Accurately operates the POS system and accounts for all transactions (cash, credit, returns)
•Provides professional customer service in areas such as describing benefits of various lenses and frames, replacing screws, adjusting frames, and quickly identifying other special customer needs
•Open and/or close the store according to established guidelines
•Displaying a gracious, courteous and polite manner when interacting with all customers, service providers and associates. Providing exemplary customer service

Towson University, MDAugust 2010 – September 2012
Visual Resource Library Clerk
•Perform clerical duties at reception desk and assist all library patrons with troubleshooting faxing and copying documents
•Answer calls and provide any information on available library services, resources and databases for customers
•Filing, sorting, and editing image documents for easy access to patrons
•Manage, monitor and process all library card catalog slides






CORE COMPETENCIES
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•Excellent verbal and written communication skills to effectively work on group projects with others.
•Outstanding customer service and marketing skills to surpass company quotas
•Expert knowledge of Microsoft Office software, including Word, Outlook, Excel, and PowerPoint to create professional formal letters for company wide distribution as well as compile data into attractive presentations for management use
•Continuously flexible in stressful work environments with proficiency for completing tasks ahead of time
•Possesses ability for creative thinking to implement designs into fruition for desired results in accordance with organizational goals
•Intermediate knowledge of the Adobe Creative Suite
•Strong sense of determination and an exceptional willingness to learn

ACTIVITIES
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•Active participant of the Sociology Student Association at Towson University in planning social networking events for students and faculty.
•Volunteered 64 hours with the Maryland Department of Juvenile Services as a case manager, filing and sorting documents of the detainees and helping with orientation activities and events
•Member and makeup artist of Je Suis la Mode, a non-profit on campus organization focusing on the fashion industry

[FaithE]

It's good enough, because you definitely won't be qualifying based on your experience, but you should still add the number of hours per week you worked at each position and the pay per hour.

Be sure to get an official copy of your transcript as soon as possible, scan it into a .pdf file, and upload it to your USA JObs account. When you apply online, mark "Application Manager" as a favorite so that you can go in the next day and check the status of your application. Note your user id and password, as well.

I'd leave off the last line. You don't want to leave them with "focusing on the fashion industry."