How can i make a good commentary?

[Hákon]

Hello, i want to make better commentary on youtube. I'm not popular, and i don't see what's wrong with my videos, but obviously something because people don't seem to like my videos that much. Can you give me criticism for me to know how to improve my videos?

Here's my channel: http://www.youtube.com/user/johnwilliamsmc

[kaylee]

So I watched a few of your video..and honestly, I can't find anything wrong with them...lol
Actually, compared to a lot of the ones I *have* seen, they're really good. I'm surprised that you don't have that many subscribers... As for how to get more known, this is what I've tried (and it's worked pretty well):

1) make your video titles something that you expect people to look up; a lot of YouTubers look up Minecraft videos, but usually for tutorials, Let's Play vids, "movies", and competitions. Just think about what someone might type in ^_^

2) try to get around. What I mean is invite 'popular' YouTubers to play with you, such as gamers with a lot of followers, or ask to play with them. Chances are, they'll record at the same time you do, and will link your channel.

3) similar to #2: try to get involved. Talk in forums, leave comments on popular channels, link video responses to your own videos, and so forth.

4) get your friends (or subscribers) to share your videos with thier own friends/subscribers.. It's surprising how well it works if you get a well-known friend on YouTube/Facebook/Twitter to share your page.. I've actually met a few great people, and gotten a lot of followers, from people sharing my channel ^.^

I hope this helps.. I'm not sure what you've tried already, but these are a few of the things I've done.. Best of luck with your videos!