Does this sound like a good letter?

[Emmie]

It's a fan mail letter

Dear Grant,
Hi, I'm called Amelia and I'm from England. I really don't want to sound like a "fan girl" in this letter so I'll keep it short. I'm quite a huge fan of you, your singing voice and acting is amazing, and this might sound a bit odd, but I love your hair :') I found out about you from Glee, and I loved your character "Sebastian", what was your favourite song that you performed while on the show (including the deleted scenes)?

I think my birthday card will have arrived quite late, so I hope you had a really good birthday; did you do anything for it?

I hope that this letter has actually got to you because I'm not sure where this will end up! Would it be too much to ask for a reply on twitter just answering whether you got it or not? Anyway I hope you're well and continue to do well in your career.

From,
Amelia
(Twitter name)

I think he might reply though because he isn't very well known

[Isa]

very sweet. i think send it and see what happens

[ashley]

Aww.. You should defiantly send this..

[Gregg]

You want criticism, ok: You start off by saying that you don't want to sound like a fan, then the second sentence you say that you are a fan. Then you run on about Glee so much that it doesn't make sense. Try breaking that question up into two sentences, or questions. Forget about the late birthday, I'm sure he has. Reply? To what? That you're a gushy school girl? You don't know him, leave it at that.