Does this sound like a good fan mail letter?

[Emmie]

Dear Grant,
Hi, I'm called Amelia and I'm from England. I really don't want to sound like a "fan girl" in this letter so I'll keep it short. I'm quite a huge fan of you, your singing voice and acting is amazing, and this might sound a bit odd, but I love your hair :') I found out about you from Glee, and I loved your character "Sebastian", what was your favourite song that you performed while on the show (including the deleted scenes)?

I think my birthday card will have arrived quite late, so I hope you had a really good birthday; did you do anything for it?

I hope that this letter has actually got to you because I'm not sure where this will end up! Would it be too much to ask for a reply on twitter just answering whether you got it or not? Anyway I hope you're well and continue to do well in your career.

From,
Amelia
(Twitter name)


I think he might reply though because he isn't very well known

[Jessica]

Yeah thats lovely

don't wait around for weeks for a reply though