Do you think I have the makings of a good author?

[Sophie]

Please read the first chapter of my new story 'Twisted bones and blood stained beds', leave me a comment to tell me what you think, if you enjoyed it, share it, pass this link:
http://www.booksie.com/horror/novel/anau.../chapter/1
Onto your friends, on Facebook, Twitter, Google+, even post your own question right here on Yahoo! asking, "isn't this writing brilliant?" haha!
And even if you don't like it, share it any way! share it with someone who might like it, give it to someone who might not, at least you can criticise it together then! but just share it, help my work be known and let me know if you think I have the makings of a good author ^_^
And even if you don't thing I do, be kind, please?
Thanks

[Georgia]

Your never going to be an author it didn't make sense