Can somebody help me with grammar on this?

[Chris H]

Grammar Worksheet


1.Highlight every first or second person noun (I we, us them, they). Above that word, right the objective, third person noun.
2.Circle all opinion words or phrases in red.
3.Circle all misspelled words and/or slang in blue.

One way the University of Michigan Football program supports the hospital is during their spring game. At the beginning of the season they play a spring game against each other. At the game when you walked through the gates you could make a donation and you would receive a giveaway.

According to 50 Social Networking Rules for College Students, if a Facebook user’s goal is to not annoy anyone, it is best for that user not to send application requests for everyone or change status updates. There comes a time when a Facebook user pretty much had it with all the apps and the stupid updates, and feels like it is time to unfriend a person. Being careful of the relationship status with the other person on Facebook is extremely critical and if the relationship is bad, it is suggested the break up doesn’t occur with the other person through Facebook. Writing private messages on wall posts is definitely immature because obviously the post might be seen by others, and athletes are especially the ones wanting to avoid any problems associated with social media.

The NCAA doesn’t have a specific rule or ways in which they could best monitor how athletes post information online. In fact, Universities can allow accounts by athletes or forbid them all together and threated to kick them off the team. The main focus is on Facebook, since this is obviously the most popular social networking site for college students. There are reports of schools punishing athletes because of incidents related to Facebook.

As of 2010, Nike was tied to almost everything in the athletic department at Knight’s alma mater, the University of Oregon. The company deals with many college and pro sports teams that use its equipment exclusively. Nike has some unique sponsorship deals with the Indian Cricket team, the national soccer teams in Brazil and Portugal and soccer teams like Manchester United. Furthermore, the company uses these deals to get its logo in full sight on uniforms and inside stadiums, which constantly enhances the visibility of its products.

The government offers different types of incentives for switching to renewable energy like solar power. According to the financial savings web page by a company Solarcity, it mentions that State and local rebate programs are available, as well as federal tax credits, and renewable energy credits. In state and local rebate programs, they can sometimes offer up to 40% of your system cost back to you. These programs usually will offer less incentive as more people sign up for them, because they are designed to reward early adopters of renewable energy.

Rappers during the 1980s inspiration on the way to dress came from the “streets” and the dealer’s inspiration came from the rappers. Drug dealers wanted to become rappers, so they bought the jewelry similar to what rappers wore. Some rappers rapped about selling crack-cocaine and the life experiences they went thought but some rappers rapped about how “crack is whack” in the 1980’s. Drug dealers who had life changing experiences started to rap about their experiences and how they change their life.

Copyright infringement is a crime that is costing everyone a large amount of money and hard work. The RIAA states that the annual harm is at $12.5 billion to the U.S. economy and more than 70,000 jobs lost. Therefore this battle isn’t just for the artists losing money in album sales, it is for the entire entertainment business. According to Seidenbery, the recording companies are not afraid to take action. Since 1999, recording companies have sued about 35,000 individual persons (2010). In addition, they have also attacked the specific websites by suing Napster, Grokster, Limewire and others. Recording companies have had many triumphs against illegal file sharing .

The quality of the products being manufactured in China is unacceptable and the toys are making their ways to children’s hands. This is unsafe for customers. Even after the Bush administration got involved, the government has not done enough to protect the customers that are receiving the goods. Since a business reputation is how a company builds clientele, it is important to keep customers satisfied.

My corrections:

1st paragraph: they, one another, you, you , you highlighted

2nd paragraph: apps as a slang word
to not annoy, it is best, stupid, suggested, obviously, definitely immature circled as opinion phrases

3rd paragraph:
they, them highlighted
best, obvious circled
threated, kick, all together circled as slang or misspelled

4th paragraph:
pro, logo, national soccer team as slang
almost everything, some unique as opinion words

5th:
they, they= highlighted
a, states circled as slang
6th: streets, dealers, change. life. thought, crack is whack blue circle
they, they, they highlighted

7th:
they highlighted, RIAA as slang
many, costing everyone as opinion

8th
their, ways, children's, the as blue circles
first sentence as an opionion

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