What Do You Think Of My Book?

[MysteryOpinion111]

Okay, so I recently asked a question about one of my main characters in a book i'm writing called "The Fall".

I'm adding it chapter by chapter to a website called 'Wattpad' and it's really important to me.

The genre of the book is romance/fantasy/teen fiction and it's about a girl (Charlotte Michaels) who is a normal girl but she slowly falls in love with a boy (currently called Noah Dylan but my other question was about renaming his character) who she feels a strange sensation towards. She finds that she is drawn to this boy but for reasons she cannot understand.
Strange things happen, such as the strange strength she possesses and her inability to become drunk (random but relevant, if you read you will see why).
Eventually she finds out the reason why all of this strange stuff happens but you'll have to check it for yourself.

I really love writing and I really want this book to be published, it would mean so much to me.
I would love it if you could read my book and give me pointers, but if you don't want to actually read it, could you just click on the link and go through a couple of pages so that it gets more views and more popularity. PLEASE.

Here's the wattpad link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/3448003-the-fall

My Twitter Page: https://twitter.com/MysteryOpinion

And my website (where I also occasionally blog) : http://anonymous44.webnode.com/about-us/

Thank you.

[Andy]

what's a book?

[Lilly]

it's good

[Amy Mann]

I read part of the first chapter, skimmed the rest and chapter two. Not much interesting things seemed to have happened yet; basically no hook (at the beginning at least). The writing overall is to much telling, but it's only a draft. Make sure by chapter three you have a plot established.

Good luck.