Should I put this as my bio on facebook?

[boo]

"i am Katie williams....a punk rock/dubstep fan. i know mostly everyone else is fine with looking the same so they don't get the same amount of criticism, but i try my best to be original. only getting shut down for my differences. when the brains of the average popular teenagers get past their own blown up ego's, mabe they will notice the creativity put into my style,personality,and life.oh and one more thing, being different does not make me a crack head. for some reason the that's the logic at my school. *sigh* hopefully the blood will start flowing to their heads when the style of tight tiny shorts and shirts become out dated. im also a scene model and i work as an assistant orthodontist.i hope to inspire some and mabe be a trend setter for others. and make some people think. damn i hurt her...... and now shes better then me......crab apples... i should rlly reflect on what i say. i called her emo whilst iused and eraser against my skin.....clearly my logic is a little scewed. i need to get a life. andthis concept is to show that standing out doesnt mean a damn thing is wrong with us.it just means weare not going to stand for what everyone else considers normal."

[Emily]

I like the concept bring what you are trying to say. I think you're bio is a little lengthy and you can probably shorten it. I would give you examples but I'm typing from my crappy phone (it will take FOREVER for me to type anything on this phone).

[Terence]

I agree with emily, keep thios bio short

[Frank]

sounds really good, add some more similes, metaphors and it would be a great bio. probably even good enough to be published as as book