Is this a good thesis statement?
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10-13-2012, 04:22 PM
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Is this a good thesis statement?
I have never written a thesis statement, it's about social media. It can only be one sentence with four main points. It feels a little long, but here it is:
As society blindly embraces all forms of social media, there are many aspects to consider, such as; the ability to connect with likeminded individuals; the time it takes to grow these relationships; the quality of the relationships as we expand our friend lists; and the integrity of typing versus talking. Yeah it's long...any advice..please don't give me your own form of a thesis statement as I need to learn how to do this on my own. I would appreciate comments (good and bad) and pointers however. Thank you soo much!!! Ads |
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10-13-2012, 04:30 PM
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Pretty good well done
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10-13-2012, 04:30 PM
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What is your argument? A thesis statement has to state a position that you're taking on a topic and how you're going to support it (the main points). You have the points, but what are you trying to say?
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