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[Toshi]

There is this girl model called Ruby. She is from hk. I want to send her a facebook message asking her about dj ing cause i saw a few pics of her learning to be a dj. But she is famous and has 6k friends and i happen to be one of them lol but i dont know her. Please help me correct and add something to make her want to reply me .The message goes like this-->
Hi Ruby, I'm xxxx. You seem like a really friendly person. I love music so much and I saw pics of you learning dj and finally performing in a launch party. I think that's really awesome! I've been wanting to learn dj for a long time now, but I never had the time and info about djing in HK. I'm hoping you could recommend good places or djs that are willing to teach me! By the way, I love your style! Congrats on doing what you love and making a living with it.

[ABC]

Hi Ruby, I'm xxxx. You seem like a really friendly person. I love music so much and I saw pics of you learning to dj and working as a dj in a launch party. I think that's really awesome! I've been wanting to learn to dj for a long time now, but I never had the time and info about working as a dj in HK. I hope you could recommend good places and djs who are willing to teach me. I love your style! Congrats on doing what you love and making a living with it.