Why do people (mostly girls) feel as if facebook is their diary?
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12-27-2013, 08:28 PM
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Why do people (mostly girls) feel as if facebook is their diary?
Also I'm trying to work on my grammar and punctuation so please tell me what I did wrong in this sentence and the one above.
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12-27-2013, 08:36 PM
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Everything looks okay to me. You could have also replaced the parenthesis with commas. Other than that all looks good.
I missed something, there should be a comma after the word Also in your second sentence. Ads |
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12-27-2013, 08:44 PM
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usually it's teenage girls that treat it like a diary... not everyone who uses facebook is a teenager
but they do it because they are trying to figure out how to get popular in real life, and by posting everything they do online, they get a reaction that they crave - in one word - attention |
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