What do you think of my short rap?
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10-14-2012, 02:37 AM
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What do you think of my short rap?
always see people walking round with frowns on their face
This world is full of drugs and viloence And We all gettin judged by our race This world has to pick up the slate and step up to the plate Everynight I'm watching the news,its a fucking desrace Young people in hospital,shot or killed This world will shorly come to an end Some ppl give up and take bottle ful of pills MAKE A CHANGE go on twitter and make it trend call everybody your friend cause when it does come to an end love will take 1st and win hate will take the bait ,get caught on hook we cant look back, start something new you know what its like to be stuck in his shoes don't let him loose help a brother out scream and shout until everybody understand this without a doubt Love your eminems and keep them close Keep em as close as you can ,right under your nose Also follow me on twitter @LittleBoyCiaran Ads |
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10-14-2012, 02:45 AM
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why dont you record it??
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10-14-2012, 02:45 AM
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u have enough followers
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10-14-2012, 02:45 AM
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good words and meaning but not a very creative ryhme scheme.
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