how does my hand drawn picture look?

[The Ghetto Jesus]

ok i drew and colored this pic. for my science project and later im going to make it into a slideshow/movie. but first i want to get you guys opinon on how it looks.

be honest.

thx in advance
http://us.mg6.mail.yahoo.com/ya/download...hooMailNeo
ok this link works
http://sevenshipz.tumblr.com/

[Christian]

Can't be found. That's the error I got when trying to look at the photo. Try Tumblr, or twitter.

[Risie★Roo]

it looks really nice, i like the bright colours and the shading on the lockers and ceiling. the presentation should be fun to watch.

[Misha Friend]

as a perspective drawing, its off center
as a realistic drawing, its not realistic
as a fun pop of color, right on