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What is your HONEST opinion of this art work? - Ace - 03-24-2014 04:22 PM
I wanna know EXACTLY whats wrong with it, and what dont you like about it. Any critiques would be helpful. http://instagram.com/p/jzzaYHDZp8/
- Callie - 03-24-2014 04:22 PM
I really really like it! Is it a self portrait? The only thing I can think of that might make it better is if you used another color along with the blue. The blue is really pretty, but using maybe a purple or gray along with it would really make it stand out.
- Zapps - 03-24-2014 04:23 PM
All that I can see is the chin because it seems too flat but otherwise great art.
Ignore when it said barbecue before lol
- Sydjoanna - 03-24-2014 04:31 PM
It's really beautiful! I love how you used the blue ink too. There's always ways to improve but it's honestly really good.
- 　☥♡☮　 - 03-24-2014 04:39 PM
As it is your art, there can not be anything exactly wrong, per se,
It is of you creative license to make as you will, what every creations you wish, and the mediums of media preferred,
From that, the method used to apply the aqua blue shading as light a dark contours for facial features, in some places, have more of a mudding effect, instead of shadowing contours,
It is well place as shading, yet rough as though pastel on ink, if so, thats ok,
You have several pieces of artwork, all well done, and the variety implies that there are no bounds on having anything to be exactly defective or flawed,
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- Heiress Rhodes - 03-24-2014 04:40 PM
Nice, though HONESTLY, the lips seemed sewn ---looks a bit creepy.
- Mik - 03-24-2014 04:46 PM
the area around the chin is distracting. learn to understand the structure of the chin. all you're basically doing is copying a photo and it's shadowed areas without an understanding of it.
if you're going to copy a photo, get a good photo. this one and it's shadowed area has confused you.
look at this http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTGwccklBMC_tEblHPmLbxmA-sfMzEmFBXrFG9A_qHxfRZVIxiv it is almost identical in pose. the artist chose NOT to break up his shadowed area into smaller shadows as you have done. the result is his head looks "fuller". btw if you're going to copy, copy a master drawing,,,you'll learn more