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Would this piece of text convince you to sign up? What do you understand of it? - deepak Mishra - 04-08-2014 09:19 PM
This is for a social network after people have complained that they don't understand why they should join the site, this is how it currently looks-
A social network to expand your world
Now, we've been working on other deigns and two main candidates are-
Frensdom - Landing Page
Frendsdom
Now, I am planning to put this piece of text in bold on landing page.---
Frendsdom is for everyone whether professionals, Kids, Grown Ups or elderly or even for your pets if you like
Everyone who likes to socialize
Everyone who likes to make new friends
Everyone who likes to try something new
Everyone who likes innovation
Social networking for all, helping you expand your social circle worldwide in fun way
We know no age/country/gender barrier, we are all about putting you across strangers
Looks like you're ready to get in. Think you wanna learn more? click here
Do you think it works well for you?
- Sam - 04-08-2014 09:27 PM
Remove the "Think you wanna learn more?" title.