Would you keep reading? (This is only a little part of the story)?
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10-12-2012, 11:15 AM
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No, I wouldn't.
It sounds like a 13 year old trying to channel Tom Clancy and it's not working. If you still want to continue down this path, you will need to really do some research to keep the story from sounding ridiculous. Ads |
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Would you keep reading? (This is only a little part of the story)? - Crysta - 10-12-2012, 11:07 AM
[] - The Write Brain - 10-12-2012 11:15 AM
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