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I just need to know if this is good so far, does this make sense?
05-03-2013, 05:40 PM
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I just need to know if this is good so far, does this make sense?
I'm writing a short essay, and I just want to know if it's good so far.

In today’s society it is no surprise to know that Social Networking sites dictate the life of many young adolescents. From Facebook to twitter, to Tumblr, and YouTube; these are the faces that keep society running. Have we as a society become so emotionally invested in our own worlds, that we are no longer living in real time? Many of us would prefer to text message instead of talk, gain new followers instead of making friends, we would rather pretend to be someone we’re not instead of showing people the real us.


It's not done yet but any suggestions? THANK YOU SO MUCH!
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I just need to know if this is good so far, does this make sense? - Karina Enriquez - 05-03-2013 05:40 PM
[] - Steven Lu - 05-03-2013, 05:55 PM
[] - mommiepj - 05-03-2013, 06:02 PM

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