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I just need to know if this is good so far, does this make sense?
05-03-2013, 05:55 PM
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It's pretty good so far, but i think you should change it to "From Facebook to twitter to Tumblr to YouTube;" Twitter should be capitalized. it would also be better if you did "In today’s society it is no surprise to know that Social Networking sites from Facebook to twitter to Tumblr to YouTube......."
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