will someone do a little edit for me please?
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10-13-2012, 01:29 AM
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What am I missing?
Was there some nuclear testing going on there or something? I know the first part covers it but not reading up on the news lately. Isn't this the media just out trying to make the most money they can regardless of the casualties? Who is this an indictment against when your last two lines are "Nobody did a dam thing to stop it." Stop what? Could I have stopped it? Agree see nothing needing editing per se, the talent LC in you is obvious and want you to keep writing to express whatever does on in that complex mind of yours, both of life experiences, world ones and ones of the spiritual realm. Sir Thomas de Charney Ads |
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will someone do a little edit for me please? - firecat☯ - 10-13-2012, 01:21 AM
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[] - buddhamiss - 10-13-2012, 01:29 AM
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