can anyone check my english errors?

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If you mean correct that paragraph You wrote above then sure.

Like most of you, I am 50% Google user. I use it for everything. I also use Youtube all the time, My other half is Facebook.

For the past four years, I have been using Facebook, and since then, I have never felt uncomfortable with My privacy. I would say this mostly because, We share what we want to, it's simple.

Google is always tracking everybody. The worst part of that is, "advertisements".
I remember the time when Youtube used to be really good, but that has changed for sure. It is now filled with advertisements.
Facebook however, is very discreet with their advertisements. I believe that they don't really bother me at all, so I just let it be that way.

I also love the chat system on Facebook. Sometimes it doesn't work to well though.

hope thats okay.
also when theres a blank space it means a new paragraph.