can anyone check my english errors?

[C.N.]

Like most of you, I'm an advent user of Google. I use this search engine for all of my searches. I'm also a frequent user of YouTube and Facebook. I've used Facebook for four years, and never once have I felt uncomfortable about my privacy. We can share what we wish and refrain from what we don't. Now, Google is making this information available and tracking everybody. And it's all ad supported. YouTube has become overrun with ads and Vevo, now that it has been purchased by Google. Facebook is very discreet with their ads, and they don't bother me at all. All sites should follow Facebook's example. I love Facebook, even though chat doesn't always work.

I would worry more about your layout and content than your grammar. Your thoughts aren't very organized. Hope this helps!