Is the SEO I have for my website good? What improvements would you recommend?

[Jake]

It's important that you do have a machine readable address in the Contact Us page, you might make the font size a bit bigger, I don't really know if it's a factor. A section discussing local culture mentioning cities, linking to local sites may help with the local ranking.

I asked a small local florist, what measures they took to get top ranking in Google Places results, they said nothing was done, but the store was around for 50 years, your site being only 10 months old may be beat by better established businesses.

Backlinks remain an important ranking factor, one reporting tool, opensiteexplorer.org sees no links to your site. Getting listed in the several free local business directories may boost local ranking as well.