any marketing suggestions for a photography business?

[robert m]

Define your target market, who are they, where do they come from, how can you reach them? That will show you how you need to be marketing to them. Your current approach sounds a bit shotgun marketing - be aware such "broadcast" advertising can actually put off as many people as it can attract. Also look at your competitors what are they doing, how do they do it, what's the message. How are you going to compete and differentiate yourself?