could you please rate my poem and tell me what you like and dont like about it?

[Anna]

Fitting in, standing out, and making people want to shout
Going thin, getting fat and all the drama that comes with that,
Rumours and gossip spread here and there
Being grounded for reasons that seem so unfair
Haters, fakers and all the rest
Winning an award for best dressed
Wanting to be different, join the crew
Why be them when you can be you
Drama bullying so and so
Moving on and let it go
Face book, bebo, MySpace, twitter
All this technology is just making people go bitter
Lip-gloss, blush, mascara and eyeliner,
All this make up isn’t making anyone look any finer
Just letting you know this is the life of a teen
Wanting to be heard but only being seen