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could you please rate my poem and tell me what you like and dont like about it?
03-24-2014, 04:53 PM
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Wow thats amazing. It mentions eveything about the life of a teenager. I really like it. The only thing I would change is when you say " winning an award for best dressed" i would change that to "winning an award for being best dressed. Its all good. You should put it in a competition because I bet you would win. Good Luck Big Grin
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[] - mixxi - 03-24-2014, 04:45 PM
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