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could you please rate my poem and tell me what you like and dont like about it?
03-24-2014, 05:02 PM
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Nice one!
The rapid rhythms and clever rhymes (crew/you, twitter/bitter) capture the non-stop skittishness and constant checking out of self and others that is so well described in the poem.
May you be heard as well as seen!
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