Autism thesis statement. Is it good?

[annie42]

Cindee's answer was excellent but you need to know that the term PDD ..pervasive developmental disorder...is being dropped from the medical coding book. Instead, they will identify each type of delay separately, be it motor, speech, hearing, etc. I think it stinks. Also, aspergers is being dropped, which i support.

As to your thesis statement, it is weak. When you make a thesis statement, you should be making a strong point in which you intend to prove with your paper. Like this: Understanding autism can improve the lives of the autistic person and the people around him or her. With this thesis, I have to prove that understanding autism makes a direct impact on the quality and function of their lives. Or...Implementing programs into the community that raise awareness of autism can improve the lives of those who are affected by it.