Correct this plzz!! Urgent!!?
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03-19-2014, 10:11 PM
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Correct this plzz!! Urgent!!?
Sorry my computer got stucked in which it lead to blocked u.
(I am talking about twitter and sending msg to my friend on twitter) Is that sentence correct? Ads |
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03-19-2014, 10:26 PM
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No, it's not correct.
In fact, it's difficult to understand. You've got missing subjects, verbs that don't match up with subjects, and a lot more. There's no word "stucked." Besides, what's it mean that your computer got "stuck"? And I could go on. A quick rewrite would be: Sorry. My computer got stuck which led to your being blocked. --or-- I'm sorry. My computer became stuck and blocked you. Hope that helps. Ads |
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03-19-2014, 10:41 PM
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Sorry, my computer froze, accidentally blocking you.
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03-19-2014, 10:49 PM
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Sorry, my computer crashed which lead to you being blocked.
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03-19-2014, 11:03 PM
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Sorry, my computer is playing up, and decided to block you..
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