Would this piece of text convince you to sign up? What do you understand of it?
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04-08-2014, 09:19 PM
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Would this piece of text convince you to sign up? What do you understand of it?
This is for a social network after people have complained that they don't understand why they should join the site, this is how it currently looks-
A social network to expand your world Now, we've been working on other deigns and two main candidates are- Frensdom - Landing Page Frendsdom Now, I am planning to put this piece of text in bold on landing page.--- Frendsdom is for everyone whether professionals, Kids, Grown Ups or elderly or even for your pets if you like Everyone who likes to socialize Everyone who likes to make new friends Everyone who likes to try something new Everyone who likes innovation Social networking for all, helping you expand your social circle worldwide in fun way We know no age/country/gender barrier, we are all about putting you across strangers Looks like you're ready to get in. Think you wanna learn more? click here Do you think it works well for you? Ads |
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04-08-2014, 09:27 PM
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Remove the "Think you wanna learn more?" title.
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