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10-12-2012, 08:14 AM
Post: #11
 
"The moon is a tic at the back of my eye,"

This line really stuck out for me.

I like the rest of the poem too, but this line was...worded most interestingly.

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10-12-2012, 08:14 AM
Post: #12
 
see it's ok to
Express yourself like Madonna's new ripped off tune by
Oh that lala that gags me
like a baby whinning gaga, * sigh*
Ellen guessed it best -
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10-12-2012, 08:14 AM
Post: #13
 
Good poem about desperate times. Mtheoryr -Counting Crows version of The Big Yellow Taxi is wonderful. What is wrong with "us" - Ya know?

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