This Forum has been archived there is no more new posts or threads ... use this link to report any abusive content
==> Report abusive content in this page <==
Post Reply 
 
Thread Rating:
  • 0 Votes - 0 Average
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
Is this a good summary for my resume?
05-05-2013, 05:24 AM
Post: #1
Is this a good summary for my resume?
I've never added a summary to my resume, is this good?

Multi-faceted leader who is determined and self-motivated to produce quality work in fast-paced team-oriented environments; posses’ exceptional writing skills and creative abilities with social media, event promotions and media reach out. Proactive, results oriented self-starter with the ability to adapt to versatile environments.

Ads

Find all posts by this user
Quote this message in a reply
05-05-2013, 05:36 AM
Post: #2
 
yeep Smile

Ads

Find all posts by this user
Quote this message in a reply
05-05-2013, 05:42 AM
Post: #3
 
You have a bit too much jargon ("buzz words"), along with a spelling mistake (possesses). Here's a rewrite for you:

Experienced, highly motivated leader who thrives in fast-paced team-oriented environments. Exceptional writing skills and creative approach to social media, event promotions and media reach out. Proactive, results-oriented self-starter with the ability to adapt to diverse environments.

The final sentence is full of jargon, but it's the type of jargon that potential employers love to hear Smile
Find all posts by this user
Quote this message in a reply
Post Reply 


Forum Jump:


User(s) browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)