Is this a good "about me" for Facebook?

[Amethyst Dixil]

I don't want to sound like I'm saying too much, or coming across as fake. I say a lot less in person than I do on the Internet...

"Hiii! I like getting to know new groups of people, even if I am a bit shy at first. I enjoy company and having a good time. If you ask me for advice, or just want to chat, I'm certainly up for that!
I love being physically active. See above activities!
I want to become a commercial airlines pilot one day. I am planning on going the military route for that. Yep, that’s a tough job market, but I’m up for the robust lifestyle! Money does not buy happiness!"
Ha...I am an easily confused, young, naive person...

Looks like I got a lot of mixed answers here, but I will but things so they don't sound repetitive or predict a rather unpredictable future.

Thanks for the responses, everyone!
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[Accisej55]

I really like it! You sound like a cool person. It's not annoying like many "about me's" are.

[d3$$t!ny]

yea thats good..... but personally i dont write anything

[Alicia]

yea thats a little too much... but thats just cuz i dont write one but i think its good =)

[Dylan :D]

It sounds good to me. (:
All I would do is add "My name is _____ and I'm ____ years young." after the Hi. :]

[Q-T-Pie]

no. Start over.

[STUCK]

not to be rude but its kinda weird that your talking about what you want to become. and i dont know a lot of people who have about me's on facebook, but other than that it's okay.

[Poopy]

yupyup its gooooood ik ethe other person said. not crappy stuff like other pople

[Soniya]

It sounds fabulous to me!

[Sasuke]

say a TEEnY bit more bout yourself. just a teeny bit
also use a teeny bit less !s
anyways your about me is really good