On a scale of one to five, how will this make him feel? Can you rewrite it for a six or seven?
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02-19-2014, 12:33 PM
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On a scale of one to five, how will this make him feel? Can you rewrite it for a six or seven?
I realize that I came off as a perfectionist, but maybe you can remember that I can be understanding and patient. You suggested I keep from having friends and I never asked you how you felt about me having a facebook account. I know you meant well.
10 - Frustrated 9 - Annoyed 8 - Turned On 7 - Enchanted 6 - Tender-hearted 5 - Accepting 4 - Tolerant 3 - Uncomfortable 2 - Threatened 1 - Intimidated The words on the scale are what I'm going for. Thanks! Please aim for: 7 - Enchanted or 6 - Tender-hearted Ads |
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02-19-2014, 12:38 PM
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As it was I would likely give this the number 10, and would feel defensive as if I was being accused of doing something wrong. Text can come out like this easily. I am not sure of the context, but I would write something like the following:
I realize that I came off as a perfectionist, but I am trying to be understanding and patient now. You suggested I keep from having friends and I apologize for never asking you how you felt about me having a facebook account. I know you meant well and I thank you for that. Ads |
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